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If I could catch a rainbow
I would do it just for you,
And share with you its beauty
On the days you're feeling blue

If I could build a mountain
You could call your very own,
A place to find serenity,
A place to be alone

If I could take your troubles
I would toss them in the sea,
But all these things I'm finding
Are impossible for me

I cannot build a mountain,
Or catch a rainbow fair,
But let me be what I know best,
A friend who's always there
©2005-2009 ~bex-nat-best-buds
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:iconjot-the-grotty:
good poem, I like very much.

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lost in your ways.
:iconmary-yasha:
This is a lovely poem, its nice and its rythm is fantastic and the rhymes are good but not lame, which is hard to do, especially about friendship because it all seems cliche and lame xD!!
Love it! -faves-

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:iconemode:
you have a major talent. i nearly cried when i read this. :+favlove:

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:icongood-anime:
I love it is all I can say.

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:iconmancan71:
awwwwwwwwwwww! made me tear up a bit...i don't even know how!!!!!!!!!!

very cute! ^_^

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"i know a thing or two about liking people and in time after much chocolate and cream cake "like" turns into "what was his name again?""- the hatter from the TV show Alice
:iconcrazyworld1:
same here this is such a nice nice nice nice poem

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:iconcrazyworld1:
nice nice nice nice poem

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:heart: :butterflytwo: ~ °° Every heartbeat… Whispers your name… Every thought thinks about You… °° ~ :heart: :butterflytwo:

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